I still waited …


I allowed him into my brainibus
and let down the guard to my hearticuss

He smiled and said we were on autonever
Stupid me, I believed the assalever

Pardon my contrafibularities
There are simply no hilarities

We can all relate to the moronkaneller
He’s just another frankenfeller

Yet still, I sat there and waited, but he never came back

28 responses

  1. 🙂 I’m pretty sure you aren’t the only one who ever waited….

    1. I wrote this as part of the Speakeasy challenge. I must say it was kind of difficult, I was hoping the first one would have been easier. But I think I will stick with it, it is only once a week, not once a day like that damn Zero to Hero crap.

  2. Lol damn zero to hero crap ? 😀 Speak Easy is far more fun ! Loved your poem 🙂

    1. Thanks…It started out OK …I’ll stick with the speakeasy for a while!

    2. Hahaha Lala now I’m really laughing out loud!!! You crack me up! And Monique, that was awesome – I really loved the brainibus and the hearticuss! ;^)

      1. Thanks! I thought a little about what direction I would go with this, glad I could get some chuckles.

  3. Delightful! I love your sense of play.

    1. Thanks! I did have a little fun with it!

  4. You’re a Poet and you know it!

    And I would never laugh at your photos… you are way too cute… even when drinking out of a paper bag…

    1. Thanks … I think 🙂

  5. I like the rhyming of your poem.

    1. Kind of easy when you make up your own words 🙂

  6. Assalever is my new favorite word. xo

    1. I’m leaning toward moronkaneller ….

  7. Great take on the prompts, Monique! Love the imagery even your imaginary words conjure up. Nicely done! And welcome to the speakeasy! 🙂

    1. Aww thanks. I was a little intimidated .. but no more.

  8. This one made me smile! I like your made-up words… for some reason “frankenfeller” stands out. It’s just fun to say 🙂

    1. It’s funny how we all have our favorite “word”. Glad I could make you smile!

  9. “The Hunting of the Snark” is a favourite of mine, so I’m just loving this. It’s a lot of fun. I’m looking forward to my first opportunity to refer to someone as an “assalever”!

    1. Haha…your comment was a welcomed morning laugh.

  10. Haha! What a great use of the video prompt 🙂

    1. I was afraid I didn’t do it correctly .. at first. Thanks for visiting!

  11. This is such a great piece, I love all your made up words. The first two lines were my favorite, but I loved the whole thing. Great job.

    1. Yes … I think lots of people will be using the “word” assalever in the future 🙂

  12. One of the few poems where everything made sense, despite all of those fascinating words. I love it! Great take on the prompt; I doubt anyone has done better than this!

    1. Wow … I’m flattered. Thank you!

  13. Don’t be surprised if “assalever” shows up elsewhere 😉 That’s just a fun word. Great poem 😀

    1. Your talking about in a blog right? No shortage of assalevers around 🙂

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